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J DeCeglie
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J DeCeglie 2009

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Relief


He took respite from what seemed like truth. Whether it was complete truth was uncertain, though worth the mental exertion to conclude. Though that wasn’t true either. He knew pretty well that it wasn’t absolute, very little was or more so could be exacted such, but it worked right now very fine for him and was as close to truth as he could or required to get. It was roughly true. Time spent inauthentically could give rise to time spent authentically. Every hour he endured working gave him money that in turn gave him time. Any section of existence not spent existing for money was spent on his work. Inauthentic existence in terms of any time spent not on his work could give way to intense periods of authenticity. Intense authenticity gave birth to his work. Thus anything which allowed for intense authenticity he deemed essentially good, no matter the anguish the doing of it caused. Again this was not absolutely true, though the meaning was meant just for him. Just for then. Working for money days on end meant working at painting for days on end afterward and the depths reached whilst living inauthentically were matched by the heights soared when existence leant to meaning and purpose. The pummelling his spirit took whilst teaching relief at a local high school could be trounced by the thrashing of a canvas for days afterward. The abyss looked at from both standpoints was entirely contrasted, from the bottom the meaninglessness meant just that, a thousand zeroes never did add up to one, despair strangled you mornings and most days were like being beaten half to death, from the top the view skewed and thus the meaning, from here the abyss was the range man had reached, he was his own, he had conquered vertigo and days were purpose and meaning and his, this was the view of beyond man, of a further consciousness, of course glimpses of either view could sneak into the eyes from opposite viewpoints, it happened regularly, it was sudden and forceful, he tried to eliminate the depths from the heights but include the heights in the depths. Consciousness was his to rule. He realised he had will. He knew the individual mattered most. That recovery was personal and could only be gained through the self. If one had not the intention of living than one did not live. That was absolute. There was nothing other than that. He wanted to live more than anything. It was the only piece that concerned him. With this came not living, feeling it and seeing it much moreso than others. Never accepting it. Fighting with it. Never not feeling it within inches. Searching for feeling when deliberately living inauthentically gave way to what happened. Though it can’t be said he didn’t choose it. Every action is your own and each matters more then most human agents ever realise.

Beauty was the greatest cure for his inauthentic existence. Transcendence toward meaning no matter how inexplicable or personal. And beauty came to him. His eyes were trained for it. He felt his understanding of it was superior, that what he saw was the furtherest end of beauty, that most missed it, too busy bothering with instinct and the unpleasant bottom end of the spectrum. Clarity was beauty. And when he saw it he felt it. Sunlight through water. Glimmering lucid through trees. Glowing on faces and skin and reflecting from eyes. The buoyance of radiance, how it could lift the dark shadow of days spent seemingly wasted, of time not doing that which you are called to do, how moments exceed life, like a well suddenly overflowing with water.

The day after deep authenticity was always the most awful. The headache came in the night. Preceding it. The pressure building in all the sinuses of the head. The tensing of the soul. Freedom ripped from your hands. He’d worked like never before. Two canvases at once. Reading immensely in between. The luminosity he’d been able to achieve in the nude was matched by the stark severity of objective lines in the landscape. The paint was thick and good. The canvas’ loaded til their brim. When he stood back and observed what he’d achieved he felt so right that it meant more than being alive. It was being alive. It was existence. Portals of dark lustre, of vivid being, brushstrokes like moments lived without end, like cool fingers on burning eyelids. He’d used her hair colour, that yellow the sun gives when almost white. When it’s seems most nourishing and allows everything its most shining shade. He’d captured it strictly, and then let it grow of its own. It wasn’t exactly right but it almost was. When he went to school the next day and she wasn’t there he thought about how life was ruled by emotions and how those emotions were nearly too much for him some of the time. To see her walk through the shadows and sun just for a minute, against the backdrop of shaded palettes and sunlit objects, it would have been enough, it would have somehow been meaning. It was a dreadful day. Endured rather than lived. The clarity in faces of others not enough to save him from himself and the abyss from this lowly stature. That night he scolded himself terribly for allowing the outside to influence his self so much. Too grant such room for tiredness to claw at him. To only see through that narrow slit. It was fragility of the worst kind. He sketched his on face from the mirror and left it nearly skeletal.
He hoped she would be there tomorrow.

The inauthentic can give way to an intenser method in time. That was certainly true. Authentic living is life without that feeling. Can it be achieved fully or mostly? He who has the meaning in his life can endure anything to achieve that end. Inauthenticity as a means to authenticity. It was his ideal, to live it was the most important thing. There was nothing else.

In the house he lived you could hear the traffic whip past all the hours of every day. The morning sun shone through the front of the place leaving the hallway ruby as it poured through the same coloured curtains of that room and out through the doorway. Concentrated crimson cherry walls in the room and leaving his naked skin and the canvas laying about all blenched blushing and brightly glowing as if a dream viewed though vibrant rose coloured glasses. In the afternoons the sun swung around and streamed throughout the large back garden making leaves translucent, golden and green, swaying shadows and sunbeams like yellow oil paint, light flickering though foliage, shivering shadows that never end on living room walls. Turpentine and the freshest air. Damp nourishing soil and the aroma of paint. Every colour meant something to him as he could capture it and give it another more determined form. He painted what he saw, and everything blazed there, in those eyes, the sheer clarity of beauty and the meaning of moments against the weight of meaninglessness which seemed vitally lazy, the way the sun just took over his vision, how he could look straight into it through leaves and branches and the vines that ran amongst them, the blazing glory of the star, the sheen and glow and transcending fluidity, the ruby of the hallway and that room overpowered him at times, the sun on the river when walking by it gave life more than enough, that dire sense of loss and loathing vanished. Live!
Live.

For over a week he worked solid at school. She was not in any of his classes. Some days he saw her and others he didn’t and he made an effort to not distinguish one from the other. He kept to himself mostly. Drank much coffee. The ideal was the method to live. At night he read and touched on paintings rather than beginning new compositions. He had gained new insights. Furthered his line of thought. The inauthentic days could be furthered not only by beauty, and of course by reading, but also by adhering strictly to the ideal. By defining one’s self by every decision made. Every single one. Thus allowing the self to grow as an individual along truly authentic lines of meaning based in honesty and decency. The real I. Just managing through the days of drudge was nowhere near enough, a determined soul could always manage no matter how it felt. There was more. There was. Form could be gained in this manner. Meaning could be added. Life did not front up to man but he up to it. Although he could tell by the way in which she lit up when she saw him that he had started something. How she said hello to him was a dazzling flourish. A blooming before his eyes. He put how quickly the ideal could leave down to the fact that he was raw with it and that everything takes time to come through, he could not paint as he did now always, it took much practice and trial, surely existence was the same. With work it was mastered. Soon her smile and voice would not be greater than the entire ideal itself. She would not be the equal of the sun always.

It got far worse though. He began to paint her.

Started to work after school. Normally the inauthentic day would drain the juice and he could only work in limping spurts. In limited strokes and dabs. Definite yet diminutive. Though now he worked in a sacred fervour. After hours of little meaning he could straight throw the shackles and work with absolute zeal. He was torn on the meaning of the ability he now found. Divided as to its gain and origin. He may have evolved along his own system, developed further authentic talent, the inauthentic taking less so that the authentic could be harnessed more thoroughly, more quickly, being able to gain immediately after the inauthentic experience rather than enduring the waiting period which was previously required. The well was filling rapid. The method may have produced its own results. What stole his belief in this matter fully was her. Unsure of what she had added. Trying to understand if he was now accessing reservoirs of energy he’d not yet known, or whether she was fuelling his truths with her unceasing brightness. It only played in the back of him. He went with it mostly. When he didn’t teach he worked all day and night in clarified fury. When he did he began immediately afterward it and did not cease til early morning. The feverous lick of it electrified him. Made his blood swim clean through him. The brush a bone connected by tendon and sinew, nerve-endings running into the bristles, the paint his own fluid lent to the world still wet and drying in her ideal illustration. It was his best work by far. It was his own and every stroke said it such. It came from the ability to shirk the inauthentic as soon as it was done. This newfound capacity inspired him no end, he felt a man beyond men, an original consciousness or the equal of those he’d read about. He was gambling as the real artist does, with his life as the stake. Though there was more. There was her too. To gain so swiftly. To enlarge such, to expand so, is never real without the work put into it firstly. He had gained, and worked, though this was beyond that.

The perversion evaded him, or he ignored it. All there could be was the work and her.

Shedding personality comes with it. Essence shines through. He speaks to her as much as he can. He has decided that just smiling and saying hello is counterfeit. That just getting by on her countenance is bogus. He can see the affect they have on one another. Felt in himself and witnessed in her. The lighting up from the ribs outward. Bones glowing and skin alight. It all able to heard in the voice and seen in the smile. The attraction of two objects falling at the speed of destiny. How people move in straight lines forever unless their will tends them off that lifeless course. She would stare at him and then look away when he noticed. He’d watch then, stare back, and occasionally she’d turn again and smile. In those pieces, those fragments, he wanted to show her the canvas more than ever.

It was the colour of her hair that mattered most. Nothing was more important to the piece. He’s never seen anything like it on a canvas, and capturing it such was the most vital and difficult section. He used it to justify that the work was not just about and for her, but about new ground and originality just as equal. It took up as much time as the entirety of the rest. The getting right of it. Producing what he saw and felt through it. He’d gotten all the rest. Gotten it fine and true. There she was as he knew her. Maybe more vivid than in his eyes by day. The lips, the large blue orbs, their lids and their lashes, the skin, the jaw-line and cheekbones, the neck. All essential, but lacking. It was the hair, it bought forth the brilliance, down to her breasts, straight and blonde, much beyond wheat or sunflowers, yellow further than daylight, purer than that that radiates to Earth. No it was the real light, coming off of a star, white golden and untainted in space, streaming from her head like it does in the unseeable sky, monumental strands luminary trailing across galaxies, it took him a week to mix the colour right. Hours on end. He did it from memory. He did the entire canvas that way.

Summer was being delivered. It spirited sundrunk bursts. It bought with it new fragrance, new light. Colours seemed certain, drying on the entire canvas around him just right. Definite in his eyes by the early morning. Time was dissimilar due to the changing of the seasons and the moments spent anticipating her. This was new time.

Existence forced a thought upon him. A moment came and went and he thought of dying. Of the moment being, then not, and how what had not occurred in that moment could now never be. At least not in that moment it couldn’t. So he thought of death, of how having it present in decision making made one live more fully. Life was not lived as if owned and capable of putting off til one was ready, but rather as a looming and pending weight coming with each day. With a grave in mind there was life, urgency and joyous burden, a significance in your individual survival and meaning, without it, days became carried on a conveyor belt gone awry, just tumbling off a mistaken eternal end and piling up on the floor without order or any person overseeing the arrangement. It was no way to be. He felt he should have kissed her. During it and afterward. After class. The planet sprung the moment on him and he went with his common sense. Drew back just inches. Enough to say no, not now, probably not ever. Swimming in the faultless blue of her pupils, drowning in the fleshy pulp of her staring lips. It would have changed everything. Would have changed the planet. Just his four fingers on her neck and thumb on her collarbone. Just breathing in her petalled breath. The whole classroom and universe smelt like her. She was a beautiful teenage giant. Much shorter than he. His tissue disappeared off of his bones and his organs blew away like dust. It was Friday and the clouds kept the heat close like prickly gauze wrapped tight on your skin. On hers. Shining on her cheekbone. She smiled before she left. Not speaking, he put it down to confusion. To all the things he’d made her feel. It made his heart bound in his chest. As he drove home he thought about death, the effect it could have on life, it spotted rain as he drove, pregnant lukewarm drops leaving cleaner streaks on a dirty windshield, at home he painted, madly, he finished, splendidly, he thought he may have to leave, cause it would happen eventually, some degree of something, any degree of anything meant scandal, he would show her the painting first though. Make sure she understood who she was. Make definite he hadn’t invented the total production in his mind. He could regret the entirety of it later.

He watched the paint dry all weekend. Saw the raised welts of his strokes harden. The shiny wet reflected edges dull. Outside the earth was perfumed damp and tepid as the hoary skies reigned. He couldn’t pick up a brush. Not even a pencil. He knew what had happened but avoided knowing it completely. It was a magnificent canvas. She looked healthier than he had ever projected. More alive and more striking. The hair was the genius in it. It was the axis the art of it revolved on and its balance was unshaken. He had never seen such a colour before, and he knew he had captured it wholly. That wasn’t the lot though. The smile and eyes revealed such beauty, an innocent sadness and longing being divined with feeling she didn’t yet understand. The posture so awkward, not sexual, not the opposite. It was an authentic piece and he had worked on it as such, he’d gained authenticity through inauthenticity, his ideal, even with the corruption and strength of his feelings for her. He tried to convince himself of it. To outweigh the weighted truth with the work. By Monday morning it had not shifted an inch.

The painting had not dried sufficient to be moved. It would have been a vast mistake to have bought it to school anyway. He thought this as he drove. About death affecting decisions to fatal ends. He also thought about leaving soon. About new schools, new students, teachers, he thought about new countries. It excited him. Could he ever just have the paint? Just the art? Somewhere else maybe he could. You just had to find the right method. He had a nice feeling in his gut about seeing her. A simple good notion. She wasn’t there. Or she didn’t wait by where they usually said hello to one another in the mornings. It would have been understandable if she hadn’t. After Friday and all. The sun was fierce very early on. Pointed and unrelenting. He felt like an ant under a magnifying glass. Kept to the shade where he could. He could tell by the excitement of the chatter that something had occurred. The simmering in the voices. The rumble was too much for a Monday morning. It didn’t take long to get some intelligence on the weekend. Some party. Too much alcohol. No parents. Older kids. At first there were just brushes with information. Scrapings. The same clippings again and again. Little flinchings. Papercuts. You just had to find the right kid though. The one that would tell you everything. By recess he knew she’d had much too much to drink. She’d been fumbling about and laughing. She’d kissed at least three boys. All older. Not all from school. He was sweating now. The feelings in him were up ending. Words hurt like knife wounds. Biting at his lips with the pain. Tightening with his flashing thoughts. At first he knew it as his fault. That seemed straightforward enough. He’d driven her that way. She was young. Was hurting via him. His inability to act. His lack of dependability. He’d never imagined her behaving like this. It hurt like a damned bastard. By fourth period he hated her a little. He thought nothing of it. He’d also daydreamed of suicide a number of times. This wasn’t unusual for him. He’d decided to press for more at lunchtime. There was no choice but to know the reality of it. He was on duty watching the students go mad on the oval. The clouds had come in and the air was so close you could almost drink it. He watched out off the embankment like a General overseeing his troops. The view was not dissimilar. There was mayhem out there and the same stuff in him and God knew what he was supposed do about it except try as hard as he could. He found the kid he was after. It had to someone who saw it as bragging. Eliciting everything that happened as a method to gaining an obtuse respect. It was never the brightest spark that divulged. Usually a male. This time no different. He told him to pull his pants up before the conversation began. The boy smirked and tried it out. Didn’t take long, never did. Yeah she was there, looked hot too, nice short skirt, really smashed, more than me even, hooked up with different guys, went off with one of them, year twelve, everybody saw, she didn’t come back with him, friends couldn’t find her for ages, they were getting stressed, she’d just passed out under the swings in a park down the street, he came back, was showing everyone her underwear, flowery things, took them out of his pocket, bra and panties, very funny sir.

The kid gave the name up without a blink. Just like that. He knew the guy. Didn’t know straight off what to do. The unwanted images stronger inside his head now. Focused from obscurity. By the end of school he’d gotten hold of the address. He surer of his actions by then. More definite in his definition. Driving home he thought of liquor. Of the ease and burn that would come with it. He imagined ripping the canvas to pieces. The still drying paint smudged all over him and the floor in the fight. Sitting in a corner drinking. This led him to thoughts of cowardice. Spinelessness. No the feat had to be true. If not then it had no right to fruition. When he arrived home, he stared at the painting, trying to change the meaning back to what it had once been. He found the intense hatred he felt was directed mostly at himself. She was still beautiful. It was a wonderful work, his best, now dreadful to him and a reminder of something he wished he did not know, but always had. He could never destroy it.

He sat in a cold shower for a long time.
Determined that after all this done he would try again. The ideal would not be abandoned with such ease in the future.
When he was done it was almost dark.
The heat seemed to make the night burn black orange.
The air smelled sweet with dampening road and lawn.
He had it planned to the letter.
Got dressed and drove over to the house.
The boy left about forty minutes after he’d arrived.
He followed.
To another house, he recognised the girl who answered as another student.
A year twelve like he.
His thoughts the whole time were of conflicting developments, not of what to do then, no, that was distinct, it was the aftermath that lay waiting to be determined.
In the three hours he had to pass in waiting he set himself.
In position.
In mind.
So that when the time came, he would set upon him like a loaded spring, giving the boy no chance.
The first anonymous blow knocked him over; the rest was nameless and profound flood.
No he’d never show her the painting.
He’d just take it with him when he left.

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J DeCeglie
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J DeCeglie 2009

 

 

 


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